My Writing So Far (Jeremy Stewart)

When I first started writing I tried using the ten signinificant events to help me write. It was working but for some reason I wanted to shortin it, I got to about five pages and realized that this isn't working for me. I talked to my parents about it and they suggested I write about what I'm really feeling. So far it's been workin however, my grammar, switching between past tense and present, and my dialogue isn't very good. I've been learning from the past workshops durring class and that really helps. I just hope I can drag on my new story for twenty four pages. I still don't know how I'm gonna do that because I have never written this much in my life.